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Thursday, February 16, 2012

Valentine's Special - Forever Young: Blessing or Curse by Morgan Mandel - 99 Cents on Kindle

Special For Valentine's Week - 99 cents on Kindle
Forever Young: Blessing or Curse is not a romance per se, but I've included many romantic elements. Why? Because I can't help it. Romance somehow always wiggles in before I can stop it. After all, Love Makes the World Go Round!

The scene opens in happy anticipation as the heroine, 55 year old Dorrie, is driving into the parking lot where her husband works so she can meet him before going to a celebration dinner for his first raise. Happiness turns to disbelief when she sees him sprawled on the asphalt. She barely gets to him in time to hear his last words.

Throughout the book, despite the wonderful things that happen to Dorrie, chief among them being her reversion to the age of 24, one thing remains clear. She loved her husband, and would give everything up if she could get him back and get the chance to grow old with him. The love story is not the only story, but since it's Valentine's week, I thought I'd mention it.

Here's an excerpt:

A limp object lay sprawled in the parking lot where Dorrie was to meet her husband. It looked like, no it couldn’t be...
Pulse pounding, she hit the brakes and flung open the door. A few steps, and she stood  staring in disbelief at her husband’s still form. That red streak didn’t belong in Larry’s salt and pepper hair, nor should it mar his olive skinned cheeks, and trickle onto his white cotton shirt.
She groped in her purse for the smartphone. Fingers shaking, she dialed 911. “There’s been an accident at the Life is for Living Institute. I need an ambulance. Hurry, please.”
A helpless feeling engulfed her. If only she knew first aid, but in all her fifty-five years, she’d never bothered to learn. She had to do something, but what? Bending down, knees scraping the asphalt, she touched her husband’s hand. “Larry, it’s all right. I’m here.”  She wanted to be brave for him, but couldn’t keep her voice from quavering.
He whispered something she couldn’t catch, something about his iPhone.
“I found it on the nightstand, Larry. It’s right here in my purse.”
“Dorrie, I want you to keep it. Something’s…on it,” he gasped.
She bent closer. “I know honey, all those songs and photos. They mean a lot to me, too. Don’t worry, when we get home tonight, we’ll share them together.”
“No, more…Life is for Living isn’t…Forever Young isn’t…”
He struggled to speak, but his voice faded in and out. He probably shouldn’t talk. Where was that ambulance? Her husband needed help.
Larry flashed a weak smile and looked straight into her eyes. “Love ya,” he whispered.
Stifling a sob, she completed the ritual. “Love ya, back.” In their thirty years of marriage, how often had they said those words to each other?
His lips stilled. His hand slackened. His brown eyes stared unseeingly, as his face froze into a smile.
This can’t be happening. Larry, you can’t leave me. It’s too soon.
 Blood rushed to her head. Roaring filled her ears. Larry couldn’t be gone. She’d prove it. Dorrie bent to kiss his lips. They felt warm and soft. He must be alive. Soon the ambulance would come, the paramedics would fix him, and he’d be all right.
She glanced again at Larry’s still form. The truth hit, sucking her breath away. She didn’t need a medical examiner to tell her what she could see with her own eyes. Larry had left and would never return. Her stomach convulsed, her chest heaved with sobs.
It shouldn’t end like this, not in the middle of a parking lot. Larry deserved better. So did she.

Forever Young: Blessing or Curse now 99 cents through Saturday, Feb. 18, 2012 on Kindle.
At $1.99 on all other electronic venues, since it takes about 3 weeks to change the price there.

Morgan Mandel

11 comments:

  1. Morgan, depending on how young, I think it would be a curse. Although, I'd certainly do things differently if I had a chance.

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  2. What an excerpt. You gave me goose bumps. I can't wait to read this book.

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  3. This is a fabulous book. I'm so glad I got a chance to read it.

    Wishing you the best,

    Cheryl

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  4. I'm intrigued now by the concept. And that was a very touching scene, especially that moment when she just knows he's gone.

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  5. Great opening and very poignant concept, Morgan. Thanks for sharing this.

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  6. I really feel for Dorrie in this excerpt. I think that would just about be the worst pain imaginable. In such a short section, I found myself intrigued!

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  7. I'm glad I met my objective - to get readers suffer with my character.

    I can be a mean author at times. (g)

    Morgan Mandel
    http://morganmandel.blogspot.com

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  8. Morgan, what a plot. I don't know if I'd want a "do-over." Tweeted and FB'd.
    Steph

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